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13-05-2022 04:05 PM
13-05-2022 04:05 PM
So Who Cares
I hope this one passes muster. The sentence in brackets I wrote at the time of original writing; 2016. I'm sure I've written worse.
(Probably the worst thing I have written! I just can't get it right! But hey! Who cares?)
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Caring
Sharing
Being One.
Crisis Over?
Back To Fun.
Leaving The Desperate
The Lonely One.
Where Are The People
Who don't belong
I can't hear them
I never have
And I feel really, really bad.
No one there, only me
Just my shadow do I see
I hug the darkness to me
I feel its close familiarity
It is my only friend
And tempts the depression
The solidarity of one is all
But I am all, just one
Fake laugh, fake smile, real tears
And faking always fun!
Being there for everyone
I know where I'm not wanted
I am but a meagre shadow soul
And everlastingly I'm hunted
I know how I will end up
My fate is written for me
I am not real soul you see,
Just a point of singularity.
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13-05-2022 04:14 PM
13-05-2022 04:14 PM
Re: So Who Cares
I think it is well written @IsAnybodyThere
Can relate to a lot of what you wrote.
Hoping your day has gone well
Snowie xoxo
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13-05-2022 09:19 PM
13-05-2022 09:19 PM
Re: So Who Cares
Thanks @Snowie . I really appreciate your comments and support.
I often just sit and play with words. Sometimes it works, sometimes it doesn't. IsAnybodyThere. Xx
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14-05-2022 07:15 AM
14-05-2022 07:15 AM
Re: So Who Cares
Well written, and I share your sentiment @IsAnybodyThere. I hope life soon takes on a more rosy hue for you and everybody else in need here. Cheers.